Pre - reading prediction

Reading Emotions in a Play

What is DNA? Stage 2 TRACKING MY-OUR LEARNING

Writing Narrative keyhole

 Keyhole Narrative

WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas

Using the picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing. 

Start writing here:

Once upon a time there was a kid named lennox he was the coolest kid in the school with his three best friends reece, damien and donte discovered a magical world inside a couch 

Previously, the four boys saved them from destruction from lord banana and explored a new world called montreux.

Lennox saw an island floating in the air and thought, “this world must be more magical than the other “.

Lennox and damien were exploring around the place while reece and donte were still standing there glaring at the floating island with a house on top, until lennox told them to stop messing around.

Lennox and the three boys managed to march their way out of the pathway into the bush walk and as they walked they stood across the large tower near a creek.

As they walked around the creek there was a giant drawbridge about to drop above them. 

but as quick as a cheetah they managed to duck under the drawbridge into the warm breathable water.

As they are under the water they hear footsteps. 

As if this castle was heading out to battle, when they don't hear anymore noises they get out of the water and run across the creek and was just able to fit in between the gap through the drawbridge and the hard wall.

When they get in they feel amazed that the village was full of food and drink.

People welcome the four boys and heard how they saved another world from being destroyed from lord banana.

The strangers feed them doritos and mountain dew and they all netflixed and chilled together.

Later, lord banana knocked on the door and asked for a rematch of a battle of they will take all of the villages innocent lives.

To Be Contenuied

Narrative Writing Plan

For this work we had to brainstorm our writing of what we see on the first slide and
make up a story using our imaginations.
First, we chose the people who are going to be in the story and wrote what they are doing
to save montreux.
Second, we wrote the setting of what the story was going to look like and
is what happening in the story with the people.
Last we had to write the problem and resulution

Complex Sentences With Mr Hues

For this work we had to find the complex sentences and highlight the sentences that make sense.