Pre - reading prediction

Reading Emotions in a Play

What is DNA? Stage 2 TRACKING MY-OUR LEARNING

Writing Narrative keyhole

 Keyhole Narrative

WALT use a writing plan to help organise our ideas

Using the picture above, write a narrative. Be sure to use the Planning Slides and post them to your blog before you begin writing. 

Start writing here:

Once upon a time there was a kid named lennox he was the coolest kid in the school with his three best friends reece, damien and donte discovered a magical world inside a couch 

Previously, the four boys saved them from destruction from lord banana and explored a new world called montreux.

Lennox saw an island floating in the air and thought, “this world must be more magical than the other “.

Lennox and damien were exploring around the place while reece and donte were still standing there glaring at the floating island with a house on top, until lennox told them to stop messing around.

Lennox and the three boys managed to march their way out of the pathway into the bush walk and as they walked they stood across the large tower near a creek.

As they walked around the creek there was a giant drawbridge about to drop above them. 

but as quick as a cheetah they managed to duck under the drawbridge into the warm breathable water.

As they are under the water they hear footsteps. 

As if this castle was heading out to battle, when they don't hear anymore noises they get out of the water and run across the creek and was just able to fit in between the gap through the drawbridge and the hard wall.

When they get in they feel amazed that the village was full of food and drink.

People welcome the four boys and heard how they saved another world from being destroyed from lord banana.

The strangers feed them doritos and mountain dew and they all netflixed and chilled together.

Later, lord banana knocked on the door and asked for a rematch of a battle of they will take all of the villages innocent lives.

To Be Contenuied

Narrative Writing Plan

For this work we had to brainstorm our writing of what we see on the first slide and
make up a story using our imaginations.
First, we chose the people who are going to be in the story and wrote what they are doing
to save montreux.
Second, we wrote the setting of what the story was going to look like and
is what happening in the story with the people.
Last we had to write the problem and resulution

Complex Sentences With Mr Hues

For this work we had to find the complex sentences and highlight the sentences that make sense.

Cybersmart

How to be a good son or daughter

How to be a good son/daughter
Remember the T.I.I.C structure.

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title	How to be a good son and daughter
Introduction	If you want to be a good son and daughter? Then you should spend more time with your family  Because when you spend more time with your family that  Will appreciate it. Well, I have three ways of how to be a good son and daughter?
Information 1st element	Firstly, By being a good son and daughter is that you can help them by doing chores without being told or do work without them noticing you already did it. For an example you can take out the trash and make them feel that you are a great son or daughter.
Information 2nd element	Secondly, you should be responsible to wake up early and make your parents proud like being punctual and make your parents breakfast. For example be helpful and do something nice for your mom,dad or both. just make them happy and they will think you are a good son or daughter
Information 3rd element	Thirdly, respect them, appreciate what they have done to you how kept you clean or safe around bad people. For example, When you were little they worked for money and never left you hungry or buy you clothes to wear or a school to go and learn.
Conclusion	As you can see, these are three reasons how to be a good son or daughter to your parents

Do you want to know how to be a good son or daughter, well here are three tips how.

Firstly, By being a good son and daughter is that you can help them by doing chores without being told or do work
without them noticing you already did it.
For an example you can take out the trash and make them feel that you are a great son or daughter.

Secondly, you should be responsible to wake up early and make your parents proud like being punctual and make
your parents breakfast.For example be helpful and do something nice for your mom,dad or both. just make them happy
and they will think you are a good son or daughter.

Thirdly, respect them, appreciate what they have done to you how kept you clean or safe around bad people.

For example, When you were little they worked for money and never left you hungry or buy you clothes to wear or
a school to go and learn.

As you can see, these are three reasons how to be a good son or daughter to your parents.

First day of term 4

On October 14th 2019, it was the first day of term 4.

This year our topic is life's a stage, full of acting dancing and singing every team in our school will be

doing something fun this year. our korero this week is S.W.A.L.L and it stands

for show what awesome looks likes.

Figurative language Game

1. While playing this game, I found running to the next level straight away is difficult.
2. I learnt that being the best is not guna make u hapy
3. I really enjoyed playing the game and watching my friends fight the grim reaper

Number 28 creative writing

Number 28

Write a story using the picture above as inspiration. Is this the beginning of the story or the end? Where is Number 28 going and why? Who is Number 28? What is Number 28 walking toward? What is Number 28 leaving behind?

Be creative….is it real life or fantasy? Sad or funny? Scary or possibly true?

EXPOSITION: 

Who: number 28, charlie captain jones, memo, 

Where: California  

When: 1987-2018

Hook:  persuasive, writing

BEGIN WRITING HERE: 

CRASH! 1987-On planet mars robots called decepticons are fighting to the death through their leader cybertron.

As octopus prime rages war against them and as they are about to retreat they stumble on another situation there is only one pod left and optimus prime won't last another minute, so he puts B-127 (bumblebee) in it and sends him off to earth.

As the transformers are fighting there way through their war, bumblebee is watching down on his friends as he casts away to space and off to earth.

Once bumblebee hits earth, he realizes that he landed in the middle of the forest in the middle of a training center near the military. As he is coming out of the pod. Captain jones is getting his army to hunt down B-127. As captain jones rushes his way through the forest, he realizes that he/she ( as he thinks ) doesn't want to hurt anyone. So he corners him in the canyon and does a standoff between him the army and B-127. Later a jet comes in and captain thinks someone has called in the air force but later he was miscorrected and turned out to be a cybertron from mars.

As it happens that cybertron comes in out of nowhere and attacks B-127 as he scraps him upon the mountain, while he is fighting, he chokes him among the edge of cliff and says “ tell me your friends are hiding “ after he says that he says ill never talk so he rips out his vocal voice and throws him off.

Explanation Writing

Explanation template

T	Title - What you will be explaining
I	Introduction - Tell your audience what the topic is about and what is to be explained.
I	Information - Explain the (3 or 4) elements or steps in a logical sequence
C	Conclusion - Final summarising statement, an evaluation or comment about what you have explained.

Title Be clever! Hook your reader	Animals should be cared for like humans!
Introduction Make your statement. Be clear about your focus.	Do you think that the world is too cruel to animals than they are to humans?  Yes, people take rhinos horns as a status symbol,medicine and a prize for killing a rhino.
Information 1st element Idea 1	Animals are used for food or clothing, but some animals are used for money like circuses and zoos. Some people, like hunters kill animals and get popular, as if they were brave and strong.
Information 2nd element Idea 2	Animals are killed from war or people being cruel, almost all animals or pets are being abused. Animals are having a hard life
Information 3rd element Idea 3	Pets are abused by humans for Two reasons: they think that killing other animals are funny, or they love violence.
Information 4th element Idea 4	Animals are not toys, they are actually very harmless creatures, and they did nothing to any of us and
Conclusion There you have it - 4 reasons as to -why -that will help you -for you to try...	As you can see, these are 4 reasons that will help you become a better person to animals and treat them the way we would like to be treated.

                          Animals should be cared for properly

Do you think humans are too cruel to animals then they are to humans

Animals are used for food or clothing, but some animals are used for money like circuses and zoos. Some people, like hunters kill animals and get popular, as if they were brave and strong.

Animals are killed from war or people being cruel, almost all 

animals or pets are being abused.

Animals are having a hard life, when we destroy their home 

they do need to find another then it just keeps on going until they die.

It mostly happens in the rainforest when people cut down 

the trees when there are birds living there and we just chop,kill and 

store in the museum.

Pets are abused by humans for Two reasons: they think that killing other animals are funny, or they love violence.

Animals are not toys, they are actually very harmless creatures, and they did nothing to any of us and

As you can see, these are 4 reasons that will help you become a better person to animals and treat them the way we would like to be treated.

De-extinction

Perimeter,Area and Volume

For this work we had to calculate the perimeter, area and volume of the shapes
that we encountered in each slide.
we watched videos what perimeter, area, and volume mean and wrote what we learnt from those videos!

Explanation Writing

For this work we had to do a thesis statement about arguments of a topic, that goes unnoticed.

The marshmallow challenge

Explanation Writing

Advertisement

Firstly, we did a movie that was sponsered by the shamwow commercial and the actors was
having a good time.                                                                                                   
After, we had fun recording we edited it and turned it into this movie.
soon we uploaded it on our blogs and in our turn in sheet
                                                                                                           

Genomics

Persuasive Advertisments

For this work we watched convincing commercials and wrote about what
we liked about it what it was promoting.

Genome sequence

Our DNA has a four letter code, A,T,C,G, these letters makes us who we are.
These letters repeat over Six billion times. If you were to read it out loud it would take you 57 years. There is something in your body called Genome Sequence. Around 99 percent of our sequences are the exact same. The other One percent is the percent that makes us all different. It decides everything from our height to our eye colour. Our bodies are exceptionally clever. Our body does all sort of stuff. These things don't happen with magic. Way down our cells is chemicals called DNA.

persuasive school hours

Do you believe our school hours are too long?
In my opinion, I strongly believe that school should have
Less than 6 hours at school.
Also the reasons why we should spend more time with our family, rest and relax, and spending our time wisely.
   Firstly, school takes too long to end when you have something on the night after, so do you want to spend more time at school then with your family?
   Secondly, Getting outside and dick fun activities and more, you could have time for yourself like go on your electronic device.
   Thirdly,Rest and relaxation.
You can't have time to rest when you start at 8:30 am,
If at least you could start at 9:00 or 10:00 am.
Netflix and chill is awesome especially when your sharing snacks with someone.
   Lastly, these are the three reasons why i agree we should have less time at school than at home with our family, rest and fun time.

Smart Relationships

Today, we learnt the definition/ meaning for smart relationships.

Firstly, we watched a video of how to be cybersmart online and how to
have a good relationship with anybody and everybody.

Secondly, we wrote down what,who and the qualities that can be used
for a smart relationship, like Think,Feel,Balance,Listen and stand.

Thirdly, we all shared our ideas and put it
all together.


Think with your head, Feel with your heart, Balance with your arms,
Listen with your gut, stand with your legs

What is a scientist?

WK2-Agree

                     For This work, we had an Argument, School should start later and end earlier.
                     Later we had to right about why we Agree/Disagree, then we wrote down our reasons
                     and then we wrote our fact or examples, then ending with a conclusion.
                   
                   

Perimeter and Area

For this work, we learnt how to find the area of each shape by counting the square centimeters.
After, we also learnt the area is the number of square units that will fit inside a figure.
Lastly, we had to work with perimeter which is the outside of the square units

Persuasive Writing

MyCloud

We watched a video, explaining of who,how,why and what is the meaning of "Persuasive"

So, we wrote other words for persuasive and how we can use them.

Then we took our words and made a cloud.

my scratch

Reece - Rata and the Totara Tree

my favourite game

Informative template
C
Classification - Introduce your topic. Tell what the object or animal is, who the person is or where the place is. 
D
Description - Use paragraphs with topic sentences, to organise bundles of information about your topic
C
Conclusion - Make a personal comment about the subject or report

Title
Be clever! Hook your reader
My favourite game minecraft.
Classification
Introduce your topic. Tell who, where or what it is
Me and my sister



Describe
1st element
Subheading 1
Minecraft is an old game but its still fun some gamers still play ever since 2012 


Describe
2nd element
Subheading 2
Being at minecon would be a great experience 
Describe
3rd element
Subheading 3
Minecraft is my favourite game because I like building mining and making my own redstone machines 
Describe
4th element
Subheading 4
My favourite part in minecraft is when I collect as many diamonds as I can and make redstone farms. 



Conclusion
-Summarise
OR
-Question your topic/findings
OR
-Write a personal statement/reflect
Have you ever played mincraft?







Begin writing here:
                                      Minecraft 
I love minecraft because of the building and mining and going to the nether, fighting ghast and zombie pigman.
I like finding various treasures and also mining diamonds and iron and etc.
My favourite part on minecraft is mining and fighting the ender dragon.
The most important thing in minecraft is making a crafting table and collecting food.
Making redstone farms and exp farms is more important.
I started playing minecraft in 2014 and i had to admit it was kind of fun even though i didn’t know what to do.

                         Spending to much time
I love minecraft maybe a bit to much because some times i spend more time on minecraft then i expect because i do i realized that i spend more time on minecraft then with my family.