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Monday, 23 September 2019

Number 28 creative writing

Number 28

Write a story using the picture above as inspiration. Is this the beginning of the story or the end? Where is Number 28 going and why? Who is Number 28? What is Number 28 walking toward? What is Number 28 leaving behind?

Be creative….is it real life or fantasy? Sad or funny? Scary or possibly true?

EXPOSITION: 
Who: number 28, charlie captain jones, memo, 

Where: California  

When: 1987-2018

Hook:  persuasive, writing


BEGIN WRITING HERE: 

CRASH! 1987-On planet mars robots called decepticons are fighting to the death through their leader cybertron.
As octopus prime rages war against them and as they are about to retreat they stumble on another situation there is only one pod left and optimus prime won't last another minute, so he puts B-127 (bumblebee) in it and sends him off to earth.
As the transformers are fighting there way through their war, bumblebee is watching down on his friends as he casts away to space and off to earth.

Once bumblebee hits earth, he realizes that he landed in the middle of the forest in the middle of a training center near the military. As he is coming out of the pod. Captain jones is getting his army to hunt down B-127. As captain jones rushes his way through the forest, he realizes that he/she ( as he thinks ) doesn't want to hurt anyone. So he corners him in the canyon and does a standoff between him the army and B-127. Later a jet comes in and captain thinks someone has called in the air force but later he was miscorrected and turned out to be a cybertron from mars.

As it happens that cybertron comes in out of nowhere and attacks B-127 as he scraps him upon the mountain, while he is fighting, he chokes him among the edge of cliff and says “ tell me your friends are hiding “ after he says that he says ill never talk so he rips out his vocal voice and throws him off.

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