narrative writing W1T1

Once upon a time there was a guy who wanted to fly above the sea even though when he tried it, he got a bit scared.
He just wanted to do it again because he flew and it was amazing.
But when he paid to get in the place where he got his wings he didn't see the jet he flew all he saw was a suit that had thrusters and handles.
It looked weird but he still liked it.
Then another man came up and had a turn and he started floating on the water it was confusing because the thrusters were shooting out water and it was getting the water from the ocean pretty weird, right?
Anyway, the man wanted a try after but after an hour, he was still on it took ages and he realized there was no more crowd anymore i guess they got bored and went home.
But, George was still eager and didn't want to wait any longer so he just yelling at the man and telling him his turn was over then the man back flip and sprayed George in the face.
George started to cry and figured he would just go home and forget happen.
Sooner or later he indeed back home lying on his bed in his room on his phone.
He wanted to give the man a hiding but realized he should just give up on his dreams.
He thought he’d just call the police to deal with this situation.
But, then George realized that the man who was on the thruster thing was the president of the CIA
George was surprised that the man was the president but still was confused soon George should of just talked to him instead of ringing the police,
But now it was to late he already rang the police and they were coming to his house.
So it would be scary having them knock at the door and realized he got mad at the president.
Another day has passed by without George noticing once he has gotten out of bed he straight makes it and runs in the kitchen he makes him some toast and a Milo.
When he finishes breakfast he puts on his clothes and his favourite cap and rushes in the living then he jumps on the couch and reaches the remote.
Then he turns it on then there is a knock at his door and it is loud.
George gets straight off the couch and goes to the door.
There he sees the president standing there and he asks him, “hello” he says
The presidents says that he snitched on him the other day and had to deal with him that he can't have a turn on the water jetpack anymore.
And now, he wants revenge he said he might do something very very horrible to him.
The president said he might evict his house or make the power cut out.
So george needed to concentrate he needed his life to be simple not ruined by some maniac who thinks he’s the boss.
But george had no choice but to either apologize or just let him take vengeance.
Though, having all this trouble made him a bit guilty, he thought just giving up having a simple life like, without a phone or without a t.v
But he knew he needed to do something.
To be continued